Friday, August 29, 2014

One Turn Kill of the Dark Partisan Vol. 1 CORRECTED VERSION!



Hey all, this is GottErstechen007. As you all know this is the first light novel I have ever fully translated. I attempted to translate another light novel before but in the end I just wasn't mentally prepared for it. That being said, though, while I was ready this time I was still practically brand new to light novel translation and so ended up struggling a bit at first but got better in time. Either way I ended up making some mistakes and such is why you see the guy above in the "dogeza" position. Please forgive me and know I will be more careful in the future when I translate volume 2 of this light novel series.

As far as corrections go they are mostly: names (apparently it's "Crowley" not "Kurouri"), inserting text that was sadly overlooked (my fault), and inserting an image that sadly didn't make it the first time around (my fault). Though I do my best and try to be thorough I end up making mistakes and for that I am sorry. Know that I will take this volume 1 as a learning experience and make sure to do a better job around when we start working on volume 2. So with that, here is the corrected version!

Volume 1-Corrected:

P.S. Though corrections were made this volume could still use some proofing as well as grammar checking. For those who are interested in applying as a proofer for this light novel series and helping us edit for grammar and what have you please e-mail us at deusexscans@gmail.com with the subject line "proofer for light novel"

13 comments:

  1. It's ok~ It's ok~ we all make mistakes. I'm already grateful that ur translating this novel. Thank you very much much ;)

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    1. Thank you for your understanding... and you are welcome!

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  2. No need to apologize Gott, we're human after all and knowing that you dedicate your free time for translation is enough for us to be very thankful toward you. Thanks a lot GottErstechen007 and NJMANGA and good luck!

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    1. You are most welcome... Make no mistake... We will be working on volume 2 soon enough!

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  3. Thanks a lot for the translations:)

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  4. Thank you for the wonderful translations and i'm looking forward to volume 2 ^^

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    1. You are welcome... Will get started working on it this week!

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  5. I'm french, and I was so happy when I saw your transalation that I had to comment to thank you. So a big thanks to you!

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    1. No problem... It's cool to know that people in France are enjoying this as well... THANKS FOR READING!

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  6. Nice something new to read...
    You have my thanks as I am dying for not reading anything new...

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