One Turn Kill of the Dark Partisan Vol. 1 CORRECTED VERSION!

Hey all, this is GottErstechen007. As you all know this is the first light novel I have ever fully translated. I attempted to translate another light novel before but in the end I just wasn't mentally prepared for it. That being said, though, while I was ready this time I was still practically brand new to light novel translation and so ended up struggling a bit at first but got better in time. Either way I ended up making some mistakes and such is why you see the guy above in the "dogeza" position. Please forgive me and know I will be more careful in the future when I translate volume 2 of this light novel series.

As far as corrections go they are mostly: names (apparently it's "Crowley" not "Kurouri"), inserting text that was sadly overlooked (my fault), and inserting an image that sadly didn't make it the first time around (my fault). Though I do my best and try to be thorough I end up making mistakes and for that I am sorry. Know that I will take this volume 1 as a learning experience and make sure to do a better job around when we start working on volume 2. So with that, here is the corrected version!

Volume 1-Corrected:

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P.S. Though corrections were made this volume could still use some proofing as well as grammar checking. For those who are interested in applying as a proofer for this light novel series and helping us edit for grammar and what have you please e-mail us at deusexscans@gmail.com with the subject line "proofer for light novel"